“Blu”ish “Pink”onian love

“Blue”shyed away while gazing at the “pink”

“Pink” passed a witty smile,followed by a wink

“Blue” opens the arm in style

“Pink” walks towards with a smile

“Pink” embraces her man,poor “Blue” suffers a heart sink

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This is my first Limeric.Just tried for the first time…

Please be kind…

Hope You all love this humour

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71 thoughts on ““Blu”ish “Pink”onian love

  1. It was already mentioned, but while reading ‘β€œBlue” opens the arm in style’ I was thinking of SRK and grinning. Nice piece, though.

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  2. nothing in life is so easy
    if only things were so peasy
    until that last line
    all was looking so fine
    then all went just a little bit cheesy

    nothing in life is so easy (7 to 10 syllables) 8
    if only things were so peasy (7 to 10 syllables) 8
    until that last line (5 to 7 syllables) 5
    all was looking so fine (5 to 7 syllables) 6
    then all went just a little bit cheesy (7 to 10 syllables) 10

    β€œBlue” shied away while gazing at the β€œpink” (9)
    β€œPink” passed a witty smile, followed by a wink (12)
    β€œBlue” opens the arm in style (6)
    β€œPink” walks towards with a smile (7)
    β€œPink” embraces her man, poor β€œBlue” suffers a heart sink (12)

    Regardless of my limerick the syllable counts for each line are a good guideline to follow. Hope this helps, with good intent,
    Mick

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    1. Thankyou so much mick…in order to make it humorous I just overlooked no.of syllables in 3rd n 5th line…its so kind of you to help…thanks a lot for pointing out d flaws…ur limeric is way too better dan mine

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